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出国留学申请奖学金是需要书面申请的,而留学奖学金申请书的内容对于能否申请成功起着至关重要的作用。下面通过
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GrowingupinamodestvillageinChina,Ihardlyeverhadthechancetoseemanyexamplesofmoderntechnology;peoplewhodigwellsbyhandtoobtaindrinkingwateruseoxdrivenplowstocultivatetheirfieldsdonthavemuchusefortelevisiopersonalcomputers.Butwhenmyfathergavemeanoldradiotoplaywith,Iwantednothingmorethantotakeapartthecontraptionseewhatiidemadesuchinterestingsounds.Sittingonthefloorwithaconfusedgrin,surroundedbywiresmetal,Ilookedupatmyfatheraskedthenoiseswere有删节
合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机,学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时,读了这段文字,会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里,借此打动评审委员的心。
另外一篇修改过的开头用诗一般的语言写道有删节:
IfirstreadthisparagraphMadameCurieasa14yearoldchild,IstillrememberhowwonderfulIfelt.Irememberthinking,Whatesteemedmentheywere!Howhardtheyworked!AsIgrewolder,thisparagraphbecameasourceofencouragementinthefaceofadversity.Ibegintofeelamagicalbluelighttwinklinginmyheart,kindlingaloveofscience,encouragingmetochargebravelyintotheunknownworld.
结尾呼应了开头,阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书: