开拓思路,深刻立意——记叙文同一素材的多角度立意
发布时间：2019-01-19 12:57
【摘要】：正作文之高意为先。王夫之在《姜斋诗话》中说:"无论诗歌与长行文字,俱以意为主,意犹帅也。无帅之兵,谓之乌合。"的确,没有好的立意,文字虽然有生命,但却没有灵魂。而很多学生在写作时往往跟着感觉走,想到什么写什么,哪里还想到要精心选材、深刻立意、巧妙构思?有鉴于此,我设计了一次作业,统一观察身边的人物——"卖鱼的女孩",并自主立意写一篇记叙文。绝大部分同学的作文立意为体现女孩的勤劳善良,这样的
[Abstract]:The high meaning of the correct composition is the first. Wang Fuzhi said in Jiang Zhai's Poems: "whether poetry or long lines of writing, meaning is the main body, meaning is also handsome. No handsome soldiers, called the Wu he." Indeed, without good will, words have life, but no soul. And many students often follow the feeling in writing, think of what to write what, where also think of carefully selected materials, profound ideas, ingenious ideas? In view of this, I designed an assignment to observe the characters around me, the Fish Girl, and write a narrative. Most of the students' compositions are meant to reflect the diligence and kindness of girls.
【作者单位】： 江苏省如皋市搬经中学;
【分类号】：G634.3
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本文编号：2411398
[Abstract]:The high meaning of the correct composition is the first. Wang Fuzhi said in Jiang Zhai's Poems: "whether poetry or long lines of writing, meaning is the main body, meaning is also handsome. No handsome soldiers, called the Wu he." Indeed, without good will, words have life, but no soul. And many students often follow the feeling in writing, think of what to write what, where also think of carefully selected materials, profound ideas, ingenious ideas? In view of this, I designed an assignment to observe the characters around me, the Fish Girl, and write a narrative. Most of the students' compositions are meant to reflect the diligence and kindness of girls.
【作者单位】： 江苏省如皋市搬经中学;
【分类号】：G634.3
，
本文编号：2411398
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